Monday, 8 February 2016

Moodboard Feedback

This week I did a presentation on my mood board which expressed my views and ideas on my given word - Browse.

This is the mood board I produced and showed to my class.

I started off by explaining what I did first when I got my word, I found the different meanings by using a dictionary, thesaurus and the online urban dictionary. I then went on to describe what ideas i had.

The first idea being the woman in glasses, looking very intelligent browsing the internet, with glam make up looking very unique and "boss" like.
The second idea was the tattoos expressing women's individuality and inspiration. The rage is all about tattoos now and expressing who you are on your skin which I thought was a very modern idea.
My third idea was the adult colouring books having the design going all up the neck or across the eyes which could look mask like. We use our eyes to "browse".

Whilst explaining my ideas to the class Sharon came over and spoke to me -
- I told her I was going to develop the first idea by having newspaper wrapped around the glasses to show were in a way blinding by browsing social media all the time and the newspaper came out first in 1665 which was our first way of getting news to the public
- she wasn't keen on the tattoo idea all that much and to be honest it isn't my favourite idea either
- she told me to research a man called Peter Phillips and look into his eyebrow campaign he did for Chanel which would be interesting for a new design
- one last thing was Sharon thought instead of doing the adult colouring book design up the neck, I should maybe use computer codes, as we look on a computer we think were browsing but were actually looking at computer generated codes not proper words

I also got feedback from my class mates too on a questionnaire

Most of the feedback said they liked how my ideas were very inspirational towards women, and that I had a range of ideas too, whereas I felt most people had one idea and stuck to that and developed on it. A couple mentioned the tattoo idea was interesting as it is a very modern take and you either like tattoos or you don't.
I also included words on my board that would be used in the tattoo idea which people thought was very inspiring too.

I'm happy with my feedback I don't think were was too much or mainly anything that I am unhappy with, I decided to base most of my ideas on women's fashion and modern trends and I think it came across to them too.
I will work on my ideas and develop them and change them like I have been told to do so. This will better me for the future listening to constructive criticism and working on my ideas.

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